托福独立写作资料（1）
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摘要: topic: someyoungadultswantindependencefromtheirparentsassoonaspossible.otheryoungadultsprefertolivewiththeirfamiliesfor
topic:
some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. which of these situations do you think is better? use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
topic notes
this topic, in effect, equates independence with living apart from one’s family. both broader and narrower definitions of independence and “non-independence” are acceptable as possible responses to the given topic, even though a majority of writers will write to the dichotomy presented by the prompt. some writers take a general overview and their choices and examples are general and “philosophical.” others use specific personal examples or personal narratives in their approach to the topic. some writers lake a specific side of the issue, and others approach the topic b\ discussing conditions under which it is better to move away and conditions under which a young adult might do better to stay longer with the family. all these approaches arc valid, on-topic responses and are judged by the raters on their merits according to the scoring guidelines for this task type.
score 5 essay—sample 1
every young adults will grow and live apart from their parents to form their own families.
the ages for those young adults to be independent depends on each person. some people may have to live longer with their parents and some others may not. this essay will discuss the issue of independent life and living with their families for a longer time.
most young adults prefer to have a seperate or independent life from their parents or families as soon as possible. this is because they have a strong urge for freedom in doing what they desire. but in fact many of them fail. this should not be surprising since often they are actually not ready mentally although they are physically ready. it is widely understood that to live independently requires a lot of energy and js not easy at all. in this twenty first century, people may need more and more preparation because competition is increasing rapidly. an observation shows that many university graduated students are unemployed. the refore, they will not be able to support and fulfill their necessities.
so living independently at an early age is not suitable for all young adults, some young adults may need to take more time to prepare themselves before going out to struggle. young adults need to be ready to support themselves. taking time to get more education and living with their families for a longer time may lead them to a better independent life because they will be well prepared for the hard-life outside. still, living with their families for *too* long will not be a good idea because they could get to used to it and tend to be less independent.
the time to live independently depends on the person himself. he or she must decide whether they are ready to leave their parents to have an independent life or not. the decision will vary from one person to another. a person should judge that he is capable of fulfilling his needs without being dependent on his parents; this indicates that he is ready for his independent life. otherwise he might need to stay longer with his parents.
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